Much like the last page, I didn't feel the transition was clear enough in this page from the next to this... since obviously Abbie's moved. So I added a panel to show her walking and then the observation of another figure in the fire. My favorite part of this changed page is the panel in the bottom left... I hated the original panel but I'm quite pleased with the outcome of the redux. I actually like the whole flow of all the silent panels a lot more. I toyed with adding text but was convinced out of it by my cowriter.
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EVEN MORE FIRE - February 21, 2012 - 0213
Much like the last page, I didn't feel the transition was clear enough in this page from the next to this... since obviously Abbie's moved. So I added a panel to show her walking and then the observation of another figure in the fire. My favorite part of this changed page is the panel in the bottom left... I hated the original panel but I'm quite pleased with the outcome of the redux. I actually like the whole flow of all the silent panels a lot more. I toyed with adding text but was convinced out of it by my cowriter.