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August 11, 09   -  April 24, 2009   -   0102

I just read through my entire archive. That's actually kinda weird. Repainted one panel of this page. I complained it looked unfinished before, but it's much better now, though I'm worried she looks a bit too arched, especially with the blue hiding some of her body. Oh well.

But yeah. Read my own archives. Chapter one was definately the worst of it. o_o And chapter two. I found the art distractingly wonky in a couple places and the writing, well, forced. It tightened up after that. Still some occasionally too stiff of people and occasionally, I found that as I read, I suddenly went history dump on one page, which had a lot of text compared to the last pages... and that was a bit jarring. But all in all, it read not too badly. SPOILER WARNING: my favorite scene was definately Falahil's fall, at the end of chapter three. Second favorite was this scene, actually, when she gets back to Gabriel. I think I've tightened up my pacing a lot since the early chapters. :) I really hope The Millennium House will be a better read. But regardless of my launching a second comic, Between Places will be finished.