Okay, now it's up! I repainted some of the first panel, is all... I thought that from a storytelling perspective it was badly done as I had to rely on Rease as narrator to actually convey what happened. This is the original page. Now I feel confident that I can cut Rease narrating that she 'reeled back in shock' and it still comes through as it's supposed to.
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Okay, now it's up! I repainted some of the first panel, is all... I thought that from a storytelling perspective it was badly done as I had to rely on Rease as narrator to actually convey what happened. This is the original page. Now I feel confident that I can cut Rease narrating that she 'reeled back in shock' and it still comes through as it's supposed to.