Little bit of a problem here that I'm trying to wade through while trying to catch up the update for ComicGenesis as well: this page does not transition well to what I planned to make the NEXT page. The next sequence jumps to a little short scene and then back to Gabriel and Falahil, and this page was intended to transition back to Dayun (as it did in the original draft). This page still works well as a fade out, just the next scene... doesn't work well coming off of this. It needs at least one more page, since it was formerly a chapter beginning. Ohhh well. I'll figure it out tommorow. For now, you live with one page, dear unknown people.
News
May 5th, 2009 - October 26, 2008 - 2209
Little bit of a problem here that I'm trying to wade through while trying to catch up the update for ComicGenesis as well: this page does not transition well to what I planned to make the NEXT page. The next sequence jumps to a little short scene and then back to Gabriel and Falahil, and this page was intended to transition back to Dayun (as it did in the original draft). This page still works well as a fade out, just the next scene... doesn't work well coming off of this. It needs at least one more page, since it was formerly a chapter beginning. Ohhh well. I'll figure it out tommorow. For now, you live with one page, dear unknown people.